Sunday, February 2, 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #52!

Wow! I can't believe I've been a warrior for an entire year! And I'm not all that tired! ;) It's been absolutely awesome writing and sharing, commenting and receiving comments every week, and I thank you all so much for the incredible support! Wanna celebrate with some peanut butter? Okay!

Here's the premise for Nutcases: It's the year 2033. Since so many people have developed allergies to peanuts in this century, the government has banned peanuts and all peanut-related products, including (*gasp*) peanut butter. Side note: I think that was the most anyone has ever used the word 'peanut' in a sentence. Well, as you can imagine, Morgan, my heroine, refuses to live in a world without PB. So, with the help of my hero, Clark, they build their own peanut-butter-making machine in the secret basement of her home and begin the business of bootlegging. Also, they share a few pb kisses, etc, etc. :-D

And here's an excerpt:


When she turned back to him he was stark naked. No sense in wasting precious time. The smile that lit her face confirmed he’d made the right move. She sashayed closer, her eyes trained on his cock, and it jerked in response.

Her hand reached out and gently stroked his balls. He clenched his jaw and focused on breathing.

“Nice nuts” she murmured.

He chuckled, lifting her chin so their eyes met. “Don’t eat them.” 

That's all, folks! Thanks so much for stopping by and be sure to visit the other Weekend Writing Warriors!

On Friday I celebrated my champagne birthday (31 on the 31st). The best part of my day, besides the cake made from cupcakes from my co-workers, was being carded at the convenience store when I bought a lottery ticket. It's possible the guy was flirting with me, but I prefer to think that I still look 18. :D Wishing you all a spectacular week! Enjoy the Superbowl, or at least the commercials! 
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    1. :D *grins* Thanks for reading, Eleri!

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  2. Allergic to nuts? Not at this moment. You combine humor with heat so well.

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    1. That's actually the best compliment I could ever receive! Thank you so much, Charmaine! :)

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  3. Cheeky exchange between two likable characters, he's just thwarted her possible next move! Glad you enjoyed your birthday!

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    1. Hee! That's so true. But if the woman really wants some nuts, I don't think any words of warning are gonna stop her. lol. Thanks, Gemma!

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  4. Happy Birthday! and this snippet was SO hilarious....love it.

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    1. Thank you, Veronica! So happy you enjoyed it! :)

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  5. I love how you combined humor and hotness. Can't wait to get to the peanut butter!

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    1. Thanks so much, Alexis! I can't wait either! ;)

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  6. Number 1 on my list today! Your excerpt is super steamy and humorous, it really is a one-of-a-kind talent you have, Evelyn. :)

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    1. Aww, thank you so much, Dana! You just made my day! :)

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  7. How about if she just licks them a little? LOL. Enjoyed the humor.

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  8. Another wonderful excerpt and another fabulous birthday! <3

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  9. Your snippet is fun! They usually are. You have a knack at writing great play banter between people. :-)

    Happy wewriwa birthday, Evelyn! You haven't missed a week I don't think. And happy champagne birthday, too! Good for you--getting carded ;-) lol

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    1. Wow, thank you so much, Teresa! That means a lot to me! I'll try to get carded next year too! ;)

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  10. Ha! Cute snippet and always the reference to peanut butter. :) Good one!
    The Murders of Polly Frisch

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    1. Thanks, Cindy! I'm a helpless PB addict and this story has only made it worse. lol. :D

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  11. Oh golly. I have to admit that your writing style just tickles my nutty bone ; ) Every week, I anticipate this story. I love how you shell out such creamy goodness!

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    1. Ha! You're a punny girl, Millie! Thank you so much for the delicious comments! ;)

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  12. Love the banter. It's nice to have a reason to smile--and characters that like a laugh, too. And there's sooo many ways she could respond to his last line...

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    1. Hee! So true, Caitlin! You'll have to wait till next week to see what she says/does in response. :D Thank you!!

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  13. A corny line, but it works great for your story!

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  14. As the old Almond Joy & Mounds jingle went. "Sometimes you feel like a nut. Sometimes you don't." Now you've gone and done it. I'm thinking of joy, mounds , and nuts. Thanks for the thought provoking snippet.

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